Tranquility (June Challenge)
He is the voice of reason that calms me when my heart is pounding in my chest and my sanity is ready to explode; when I am insipid and life is inane, he grounds me to reality, he is my tranquility....
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Firstly, well done Axel :) It's not easy to grip an emotion. I enjoyed how you explored this, the "he" could be another person or relating to the emotion itself. Bravo, I think you done a grand job...
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when I am insipid and life is inane, he grounds me to reality, he is my tranquility. You've met this challenge extremely well, Whispered! It's always a pleasure to read you...
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This is so clearly written and well said. You're lucky to have someone to be this for you. Beautiful write and excellent challenge poem WR!
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Alex, the expression of tranquility is really hard to write about, but you did it with ease. Well done loved every line Paul
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